You have made a good start here and you have clearly put a lot of effort into the task however, you have not yet put your sources on to show where you have found your information. You need to do this to acknowledge that you have referenced someone else's information.
You work well in class although you are still quite quiet, please get involved in class discussions and come out of your shell a bit.
Tom,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here and you have clearly put a lot of effort into the task however, you have not yet put your sources on to show where you have found your information. You need to do this to acknowledge that you have referenced someone else's information.
You work well in class although you are still quite quiet, please get involved in class discussions and come out of your shell a bit.
Ellie